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RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:49 am
by Layne.
Hello,

this is my first rip this post and this is kinda what i think it is. YOu post the picture and people comment (harshly ;D ) on itand you re-upload the picture following the directions and advice they give to make the screenshot better.

well here it the picture

Image

thank you

Re: RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:43 am
by spitfire boy
Right, I'll start with the things that could do with improvement, and finish with the good things;

Things that could do with improvement

The ground, in particular the grass, has a yellowish hue that is kinda off-putting
The sky colours are rather dull
There are not enough clouds for my tastes
There are a couple of pale-ish circles near bottom-centre that look kinda weird
You cut off half of one of the wheels on the right hand side




Good things

The angle is innovative
The aircraft is very detailed
I love the way the sun looms out over the top of the wing and fuselage
Linking to the aforementioned sun, the raindrops around that area look very nice


Overall, this shot really only needs a bit of tweaking to be a great image. :D

Re: RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:59 pm
by Layne.
ill re-upload the post a bit later after school ;) Then we will have a beauty

Re: RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:04 pm
by Clipper
Overall an interesting shot to look at. I've never been crazy about any type of unrealistic distortion in either aircraft or scenery though. I'm betting you could achieve the same perspective and drama without stretching the fuselage as much. Good eye for creating a unique style though.  :)

Re: RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 12:00 am
by Layne.
Blame wilco for that i didnt stretch it at all :-/

Re: RIP THIS:777 Take-off

PostPosted: Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:05 pm
by krigl
Please ignore me, but I think the ground colour and runway look