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Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:52 am
by spitfire boy
to shreds...

This is my entry for mees' 737/777 jc comp; I was going for the 'camera-in-the-tail' viewpoint...

Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:59 am
by Ashar
Way too zoomed out...I like the sky textures though

Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:42 am
by simonmd
Aggreed, the sky and ground look fantastic but the aircraft ruins it.
Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:03 pm
by Layne.
Sorry i dont like the angle
you could improve it by making the angle of the aircraft on the nose but angled to the right or left of the fuselage a bit or a kind of back view but angled a bit not directly to the tail or any other creative angles and this would look awesome.
Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:08 pm
by Purplehaze515
A wingview of all that would be really nice or the view from the engine.
Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:12 pm
by Clipper
Beautiful sky as previously mentioned...Flying "in the clouds" is a sure fire way to continually create great shots. The shot in principle is superb, just keep the aircraft lookng real. :)
Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Fri Sep 21, 2007 1:46 am
by spitfire boy
righto... if you looked at the jc thread you'll have seen that I asked whether I could replace my earlier entry with this;

So now I want you to rip this one to pieces instead.

Re: Rip this...

Posted:
Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:13 am
by Layne.
the plane could use a bit more detail