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Postby Ravang » Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:51 pm

This was my JC entry for the last comp. and I just wanted to know if the angle and lighting and all that other artsy stuff was ok, and really just what you think of it ;) ;D

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Re: Rate This...

Postby krigl » Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:49 am

It was an original entry for the  'terminal' theme.... I like it, the car and background look good, but there's too much "road" in the foreground - it's not a very nice texture. I'd have cropped the bottom third off at the very least. That's my main beef with it  :)
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Re: Rate This...

Postby an-225 » Tue Sep 11, 2007 5:36 am

I'm with Krigl on this one. The road below, is probably the worst part, but otherwise, its fine. Very creative idea!  :)  ;)
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Re: Rate This...

Postby simonmd » Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:49 pm

The way the car's shadow stops just ahead of the rear wheels looks odd as well.
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Re: Rate This...

Postby Ashar » Tue Sep 18, 2007 1:50 pm

I don't like the blurry road textures...but I'll give you credit for an original idea ;) ;)
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