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Rip my screenshot contest entry

Postby bok269 » Sun Jul 22, 2007 9:12 am

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Re: Rip my screenshot contest entry

Postby spitfire boy » Mon Jul 23, 2007 4:41 am

overall, 8/10. The sky's fantastic and your clouds are nice, but your water's a bit dodgy and there are some rather flat-looking islands to the right of the pic.

The choice of aircraft could have been more creative as well, if I'm honest.

However, overall, very nice and pleasing to look at.
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Re: Rip my screenshot contest entry

Postby cspyro21 » Mon Jul 23, 2007 10:13 am

Not bad, a solid attempt but a little basic IMHO - the water is a little odd, the clouds could have been experimented with more and perhaps instead of the water you could have been cruising above some mountains or over the islands themselves? :)

I'll give it a 6/10 - the shot provides some good building blocks but you could have gone that little bit more. ;)
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