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What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:11 pm
by trojan rabbit
This was my May entry, and I'd like to have some of your suggestions about making it better... After that, the next two shots were my 'runner-ups', and I'd like your suggestions too.

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thanks ;)

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:47 pm
by Immelman
Nice set of shots.  My favorite would probably be #3 because of the angle and scenery.
I would stay away from putting the sun behind the plane, it makes for poor lighting and a flat plane (that Bristol fighter already has a flat model and paint).

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:54 pm
by trojan rabbit
A last piece of advice would be to turn off the lense flare, 90% of the time it doesn't look good.

Ok, I thought it wasn't too much, but it's ruinded a lot of shots...


Thanks for the advice.  However, I do have a substantial limit on clouds and the like, as I'm merely running an integrated card.  Looking at them now, I think perhaps I should have submitted no.3

Thanks :D

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 3:04 pm
by Immelman
However, I do have a substantial limit on clouds and the like, as I'm merely running an integrated card.


I can understand that, i have an integrated card too.  It can be a struggle at times, especially with AA.

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:27 pm
by MOUSY
As said above, that angle in #3 is top notch stuff...  ;)

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 6:38 pm
by matt2190
I do not like the lens flare in #1 and the horizon is a little flat. Try reducing visibility a little bit just to hide the horizon.

Re: What should I have done...

PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 9:52 am
by trojan rabbit
I do not like the lens flare in #1 and the horizon is a little flat. Try reducing visibility a little bit just to hide the horizon.



Thanks for the suggestion :)


Now I'm wishing I sent in no.3  :-/