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Rip This Pic

Postby Canuck. » Tue May 08, 2007 10:44 am

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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby Sytse » Tue May 08, 2007 10:53 am

Nice choice of planes and angle, but there's room for improvement.

- The sky is one big blue area and that makes the horizon very prominent in the pic. Add some clouds for more balance.

- Give the planes some room.

- The formation is nice and tight, but the ositioning is a bit unfortunate. This way, it's hard to tell where the one plane stops and the other begins.
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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby Mr.Mugel » Tue May 08, 2007 12:42 pm

I think it is quite well composed, but you might set some autogen or a bit of more interesting scenery. And watch your textures, they are blurry, that can ruin the best shot, let thge textures load before you take the shot. And there is the border to the absolutely low res textures near the horizon. Set the view distance to 20 or 30 miles, and it will go away. Maybe the sun or some clouds might have been helpful, but you should not overload the shot.

Just my personal opinion, do what you like, that is the most important part of it.
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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby matt2190 » Tue May 08, 2007 2:41 pm

Try not to overlap the two aircraft. Bring the visibility down in the weather settings so your horizon is not a straight line through your shot. Also add some clouds.
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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby krigl » Tue May 08, 2007 3:15 pm

A nice shot with two classics both IRL and of the FS modeller's art!

Can't add any more to the comments above otherwise :)
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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby Canuck. » Wed May 09, 2007 9:58 pm

wow im really stupid
i wanted some one to photoshop this pic
i dont remember why i titled it "rip this pic!"
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Re: Rip This Pic

Postby Sytse » Thu May 10, 2007 5:02 am

[quote]wow im really stupid
i wanted some one to photoshop this pic
i dont remember why i titled it "rip this pic!"
                       
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