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I guess its worth a shot

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 6:38 am
by NDSP
Heres my latest shot, I figured since a lotta other people are doing it, I might as well too

Let any criticism rip ;D

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Nick

Re: I guess its worth a shot

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:43 am
by stuart1044
In my opinion its one of your best edits, congrats on the progession.....

I think a bit more in terms of weather and scenery would make it better as at the minute it looks like empty space above and velow the plane ;)

Re: I guess its worth a shot

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 7:49 am
by Sytse
787 right?

I like this shot. I love the simplicity in it and the blurring of the background is great. However, you should give the right wingtip some more space. It's to close to the edge. The jpg compression is very bad, but that's not your fault.

Re: I guess its worth a shot

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 8:34 am
by krigl
Heres my latest shot, I figured since a lotta other people are doing it, I might as well too




Nice air of realism about it.... again there is improvement. First shot I've seen where the 787 looks like a real aeroplane!

But more detail like clouds, ground would be nice... ;)

"Rip This" is one of the staples of Studio V - in this forum it's about the techniques and composition more than in the other forums, where people post shots from their tour, new acquisitions, head's up, themes, whatever. Here it's about honest, but friendly criticism... even if the shot is great people will try to find something... because you asked them to. That's how we improve....

Nice sig - Thank you for the publicity for our forum!

Re: I guess its worth a shot

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 2:02 pm
by NDSP

Nice sig - Thank you for the publicity for our forum!



Anything to chip in :)