I guess its worth a shot

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I guess its worth a shot

Postby NDSP » Wed May 09, 2007 6:38 am

Heres my latest shot, I figured since a lotta other people are doing it, I might as well too

Let any criticism rip ;D

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Re: I guess its worth a shot

Postby stuart1044 » Wed May 09, 2007 7:43 am

In my opinion its one of your best edits, congrats on the progession.....

I think a bit more in terms of weather and scenery would make it better as at the minute it looks like empty space above and velow the plane ;)
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Re: I guess its worth a shot

Postby Sytse » Wed May 09, 2007 7:49 am

787 right?

I like this shot. I love the simplicity in it and the blurring of the background is great. However, you should give the right wingtip some more space. It's to close to the edge. The jpg compression is very bad, but that's not your fault.
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Re: I guess its worth a shot

Postby krigl » Wed May 09, 2007 8:34 am

Heres my latest shot, I figured since a lotta other people are doing it, I might as well too




Nice air of realism about it.... again there is improvement. First shot I've seen where the 787 looks like a real aeroplane!

But more detail like clouds, ground would be nice... ;)

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Re: I guess its worth a shot

Postby NDSP » Wed May 09, 2007 2:02 pm


Nice sig - Thank you for the publicity for our forum!



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