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Screenshot Critique: Takeoff

PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:40 pm
by Double_Farvel
The original backround pic was a bit compressed to begin to with, but I liked the edit enough where I decided I should post it. What do you guys think of it? Just something quick.  ;)

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Takeoff

PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:56 pm
by cloud9
The only thing I can say is that the heat blur looks like it is just a guassian blur. If you haven't already check out this tut. Make sure to add some ocean ripple and use the blur tool to make it blend. Just some suggestions ;)

Re: Screenshot Critique: Takeoff

PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 12:00 pm
by FSGT Gabe
The clouds don't look real...they're too yellow...never seen that type of cumulus any color other than white.  I'd suggest making them whiter...and then I think it'll look much better ;).

- Kevin :D