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Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:34 pm
by Double_Farvel
A classic gun fight between a mig-15 and an F-86 sabre. Please leave a comment!

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 1:56 pm
by Immelman
I like it a lot, but i think it would be better without the blur in the background.

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 2:13 pm
by Double_Farvel
I like it a lot, but i think it would be better without the blur in the background.

I tried it with the blur and without the blur but I decided that I liked the blur better. Thanks for the comment! :)

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 3:05 pm
by ATI_7500
The blur is okay.

A smoketrail would give it some more dynamic 'though.

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:47 pm
by FSGT Gabe
Looks nice ;).  Great work...but the Sabre should be on the Mig's six...:P

- Kevin :D

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:08 pm
by Double_Farvel
Yes, I would agree but the Sabre looks better up close than the mig.

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:12 pm
by cloud9
I really like the blending on the sabre but I'm not to sure about the mig. Try some burn or auto color would be my opinion ;)

Good job and hope the critique helps.

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:53 pm
by Stormtropper
...couldn't you have found a less polluted river? :P

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:43 am
by Double_Farvel
...couldn't you have found a less polluted river? :P


Those are rocks.

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:51 pm
by krigl
Nicely cut out, planes are perhaps a bit bright? And yes, some smoke or something might make it more like they are moving, or blur the planes just slightly? It's pretty good though, and there's  no reason why the MiG shouldn't be on the Sabre's six - they were sometimes, right?  ;)

Re: Cat and Mouse

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:09 pm
by Double_Farvel
Thanks for the comments and criticisms!  ;)