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Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:58 pm
by Double_Farvel
My constant work at improving blending. How does this one look?

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Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:09 pm
by Helms
You're getting better, because it looks great! :)

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:10 pm
by stuart1044
Its a nice effort(better than anything i could do), but looks a bit stuck on to me

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:34 pm
by flymo
good try, could you post a link to the .psd version of this. i would like to try something

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 5:54 pm
by Sytse
It looks stuck on to me too. It's because the plane is too purple in some areas. You're getting better though. Keep it up!  ;)

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 5:48 am
by krigl
Looks very nice, not too stuck on.... it's so hard to get the blending thing right, isn't it?.... >:( Grrr....

In this case the plane is probably head on to the sun, and the lighting looks like the sun is shining more from the right. this might be the reason - possibly only the front right side should be lit, and the rear should be completely shaded.....

Could be wrong, of course :D

Keep up the great work!

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 10:34 am
by Double_Farvel
Thanks for the tips!  ;)

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:41 am
by Wingo
krigl - you it the nail on the head, the lighting is what doesn't look right. The plane has a dead right side on lighting, it doesn't suit the picture.

Farvel - Looks great anyway!

Re: Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 9:56 am
by Jakemaster
It just doesn't blend well.  The lighting is not right, and the plane is a little too rough and blurry for it to be realistic.