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Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2007 11:18 pm
by Immelman
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Inspired by the edit by MagicalNinja:

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Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 4:30 am
by krigl
Looks alright to me  8-)

Perhaps the smoke and flame could be a little more realistic - any hints anyone?

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 4:47 am
by Sytse
What program are you using?

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:32 am
by Immelman
Im using GIMP.

Yeah, i didnt know what the flame and smoke from a real missle would look like.

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:52 am
by ATI_7500
Perhaps the smoke and flame could be a little more realistic - any hints anyone?


Exhaust flame: Yellow/white.
Smoke: White.

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:52 am
by Double_Farvel
I think it looks pretty good. It's better than I could do when it comes to missiles.  ;)

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 11:17 am
by Clipper
A brief "How I Did It" would be great when anyone is postng an edited shot in Screenshot Critiques, don't you think?

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 2:42 pm
by Splat762
Once again...the AIM-9 is a rail launched missile...it comes straight off the launcher (LAU-127 in this case) and does not drop away from the aircraft when launched.

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 3:26 pm
by FSGT Gabe
Looks pretty good, but if you're trying for realism that plane just doesn't do it :-/.  The front looks very cartoonish...unfortunately.

As for the effect, it's pretty good...much better than I could do ;).

- Kevin :D

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:03 pm
by Sytse
[quote]A brief "How I Did It" would be great when anyone is postng an edited shot in Screenshot Critiques, don't you think?

Re: Screenshot Critique: F-18

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:38 pm
by Immelman
How I did it:
First I erased the missle that was on the right tip of the wing so there was an empty spot, then i cut out the missle on the left tip and copied it where i thought was appropriate in a new layer (the missle was supposed to have come straight off, but since the plane is banking away it be a little below and to the side of the plane, but i probabley should have moved it a little to the left in the picture).  Next, in a new layer for the flames, i used the paint brush tool and used a gradient and had it fade out so i just draged away from the missle and and changed colors and faded out by itself.  Finally a made a third new layer for the smoke.  I got a fuzzy brush and put it on an off-white color, but since there is a cloud behind it, you could barely see the trail.  I had to darken it with a gray fuzzy brush.  At the end i flattened it and increased contrast.