Screenshot Critique: Yorkie

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Screenshot Critique: Yorkie

Postby cloud9 » Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:50 pm

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Yorkie

Postby Sytse » Wed Feb 14, 2007 6:15 am

Nice, but I'd like to see more space for the aircraft. There are also some jaggies...
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Yorkie

Postby Clipper » Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:35 pm

Great model and your rain is effective. My main criticism is the wing is way out of proportionand makes the main fuselage look small and disproportionate. A little less zoom in with your mouse wheel would have served you well here.  :)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Yorkie

Postby krigl » Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:30 am

Yep, move out a bit, less jaggies would be nice. Otherwise, great!
I was expecting a small yappy dog with a bow on though - this is better... :)
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