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Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 3:49 am
by an-225
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Ok...rather than nominate my own crappy edit for the weekly hotshot or similar stuff I decided to see what everyone thought about this first:

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How can I improve on my edits? I'm trying to go for that artwork like feel some edits have.

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:33 pm
by krigl
Okay.... I love the colours - you increased saturation, right? -  and the wheels look very rounded and shiny, like real wheels, not FS wheels.... the plane looks very nice, but the empty sky above is what I don't like...

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:50 pm
by Alonso
I agree, the sky looks a tad empty, The angle looks very original but try to have a bit more lightning effect :)

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 4:37 pm
by Clipper
Some very rich coloring going on here, but I think you should and can give more in the depth department. Something to really seperate your screenart from everyone elses. Drama, action, storyline, unique perspectives, the list goes on and on. Don't get me wrong, a fine screenshot, but would love to see you "push your limits" a bit higher.. :)

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 2:45 am
by an-225
Roger that guys, I will give it a go. ;)

@krigl, thanks but no I did not increase saturation. ;) I adjusted colours manually. I also dodged and burned a bit. ;)

I'll try and blur the background next time to give it a bit more depth and I will add some clouds...I know there is a brush out there for paintshop that adds cloud brushes, it was posted here by BounreID...anyone know where I can find these?

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:05 am
by cspyro21
It's a very good start and a good base to work from, An-225 8-)

Are you using photoshop for your edits? If so, for a better heatblur effect (which I picked up from the editied screenie forums), if you select an area behind the engine where you think the heatblur would lay, then use the "Ocean Ripple" effect, and play around with its settings until you've got that right. Then use a slight Gaussian Blur (mind you, any sort of blur would probably work) so it isn't so prominent. ;)

If you're not using Photoshop or a program with similar effects, please disregard this message. ;D

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:13 am
by an-225
Actually that is what I'm doing. ;) Only I was taught to use the "ripple" instead of Ocean Ripple. Photoshop all the way!

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 7:06 am
by Mees
Try it with Ocean Ripple with a slight more magnitude than this, then throw in some gaussian blur and use the blur tool to soften the edges of the heat 8-)

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 12:17 pm
by Theis
Ok...rather than nominate my own crappy edit for the weekly hotshot or similar stuff

You can't nominate a shot for the Weekly Hotshot.. That's entirely MY decision.. ;) (Mwuahahaha!! ;D ;D )

Re: Screenshot Critique: Leaving KSFO

PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 8:19 pm
by an-225
lol yes I know that. I'm thinking of that...other...one. You know! The one where you can nominate your own/someone elses shot! Ugh, StudioV is so confusing.  ::) Hey I should be at school right now...but I'm not. Don't worry I didn't skip school of my own accord! Family crisis has sprung on me.  ::) ;)