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Critique time

Postby Tchkinjiu » Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:47 pm

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I posted this in the edited forum, but I'd like it to be picked apart.
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Re: Critique time

Postby stuart1044 » Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:40 am

I don't think ts missing anything, its bloody awsome, it looks soooooo real its untrue.
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Re: Critique time

Postby FridayChild » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:32 am

It's so amazingly real that it's hard to find something missing. Here are my suggestions:
- possibly add some spinning prop effect
- possibly remove the lens flare
- possibly edit the green nav light on the wing... it's the only thing in the shot that looks like FS, the rest is real-world-like.
- it's a pity that the right tip of the tail is not visible
Other than that, all thumbs up!
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Re: Critique time

Postby Sytse » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:38 pm

I think it's one of the better edits around, so I wouldn't change much. One thing I would change is the emboss effect on the edge. It doesn't add anything to the pic IMHO.
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