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Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:59 pm
by Prom0
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Hi.

This is my first work with Photoshop, what do you think?

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comments are welcome

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:05 pm
by Clipper
Why don't you try to explain to everyone what you did here, and what you were trying to accomplish.. :)

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:14 pm
by Prom0
I wanted to make a nice afterburner.I readed in Studio V how to do it.

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:45 pm
by ATI_7500
If you did the afterburner, you did it very well, although the colour should be more blue-ish for a Tornado. ;)

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 4:01 pm
by flymo
i think he has attempted to add heatblur to the afterburner effect

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:45 pm
by Sytse
Well, it looks nice to me, but the angle is off...

Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:19 pm
by Jakemaster
The afterburner is nice, but the screenshot needs a better angle (higher up), and there needs to be some sort of a background like clouds.