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Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 8:35 am
by Mees
I think this shot is one of my better, but what do you think is to improve?



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cheers

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 8:50 am
by Cobra
Im no expert, but I would say make the weather more dramatic, or at least loose the really repetetive cirrus cloud texture...

Also some scenery would be nice, the ground looks a bit bland...

Other than that is a really cool shot though, nice angle [img]http://www.simviation.com/yabbfiles/Smilies/thumbup.gif
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Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 8:51 am
by Alonso
Well... some traffic in the barckground would be much better.. :)

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 9:00 am
by cspyro21
If this was taken at dawn or dusk, so you had a nice glow from the sky, some mountains or a city in the background, as Alonso said if there was traffic in the background it would have been better, also as Cobra said if you got rid of the repetetive Cirrus clouds and perhaps add a few more Cumulus or Stratus (not too many so we can see the sky though), that would make for a perfect shot.

A fantastic base to build on though Mees, as always your shots retain superb quality and all are very crisp...good job!  8-) 8-)

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 10:54 am
by Mees
Thanks for the tips guys, btw, here is the full version :D

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 11:06 am
by Mictheslik
WOW....your clouds are amazing....do they place themselves in that convenient grid position  ;D ;D ;)

Thats about the only thing id change....an overall great shot!

.Mic

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 12:28 pm
by Jakemaster
Couple things:

Traffic!  Everyone used to yell at me for not having traffic, well, you need some!

The clouds look like a checkerboard, you need some other types in there to break up the pattern

The angle is a little weird, the horizon isn't level and that makes it strange too look at

And finally, the sun.  You either need more or less of it.  The little sliver is too little for me, it need to show more or none at all.

Just some  constructive criticism, its a nice shot but could be better ;)

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 4:03 pm
by matt2190
I like the dirt on the side of the aircraft. The clouds are in need of improvement, but a nice shot overall.

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 6:35 am
by Fitter
Its a nice shot...but sure not your best for me.... ::)

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 7:54 am
by Hai Perso Coyone?
It's not bad...But it's not the greatest either...You can certainly do better than this Mees ;)

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 10:54 pm
by flyboy 28
I cannot stand how the viewpoint moves also. I'd rather go for a photo like feel, like this;

http://www.airliners.net/open.file/0598450/L/

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 5:00 am
by Mees
Thanks a lot, James, will give it a go after christmas(at my moms house :-X)... :D

Re: Honest Opinion Please...

PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 7:32 pm
by Peanut1234
I don't like the pattern-like cirrus clouds that someone already mentioned.. But the rest of the shot is nice!

Rhys