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[thebrelon]

hey,

here is the shot I entered for the screenart war, 1st round again sgt.gabe. the theme was carrier, and kevin was the judge.
could you tell me what do you thing about it, and what could have been done to improve it. and may be kevin could drop a word to tell what does he think about it...



thanks for you inputs

vince

[Mees]

I kinda like the atmosphere, but it's highly unrealistic, Corsairs don't land there...

[thebrelon]

well... I thought I would post my opinion, it could be interesting the to compare with yours...

despite the shots is dark, the planes is clearly visible due to the clouds behind...
the clouds are pretty nice, but may be too many, too overcast...

the very negative point is the height of the plane above the deck, may be lower would have made it more realistic, and could have improve the perspective with the lighting on the deck....

do you see anything else?

vince

[thebrelon]

come on guys!!! don't tell me it THAT bad you don't want to tell....

thanks mees for the comment

vince

[Mr.Mugel]

The pic itself is quite nice, but as Mees said, too, the Corsair doesn