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BAW another try

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:56 pm
by BAW0343
One more for the gallery, just trying to get some of my scrieenies out  ;D

Image

vote away  ;D

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:12 pm
by Sniperman
Needs some aa, so a no from me ;)

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:24 pm
by Alonso
I really don't think there's AA missing there,,, I say yes...

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:28 pm
by Sniperman
If it isnt missing aa i dont know then, alot of jaggies on the plane

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:52 am
by thebrelon
the jaggies comes from over sharpening, IMO.

is it a meteorit in the background?  ;)

the contrail effect you tryed to show is far too big/large. for me...
you should have get closer to the 'bus.

conclusion, it's a nice edit, and a brillant idea, but you need to work it a little bit more, both when taking the shot and editing it... then, no, sorry.

vince

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:40 am
by Ecko
Sorry, but I don't think it's of gallery quality. Good though. :)

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:37 pm
by Clipper
Great AI vapour trail, solid skies, I think it's a fine shot but maybe not quite Gallery worthy.  :)

Re: BAW another try

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:56 pm
by BAW0343
Thanks for the votes,  ;D

It is a plane in the background, and the jaggies were from my laptop only useing 2x AA. I took the shot and edited it quite some time before Studio-V so thats why the composition wasnt great  ;D