MrJake's Second go at the gallery

[mrjake2002]

[lilley91]

sorry but no from me

its just a little too somple.

my ideas

#1 - to use a different time of day, something with a bit more mood, sunset and sunrise especially
#2 - you can use recorder to make some better angles, and get the plane central in the shot, or not if thats the aim.
#3 - some different ground formations to look at, the alps work especially well for this kind of in flight shot.

hope this helps

cheers
james

[Harold]

Yes, I agree with lilley. It's just to simple. You have a erally nice plane and sky, and your scenery is probably really good too, but the angle on the plane is just not interseting enough.

Try making it more dramatic by getting into a nice dive, climb or roll. And also try having a nice angle on the bird, not just the profile ...