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Postby McLovin » Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:41 pm

ok guys this is my first real screenshot edit ever. so let me know what u think!
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Re: not sure? Gallery try

Postby Immelman » Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:08 pm

A little too much blurring for me.
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Postby MOUSY » Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:31 pm

Definitely too much... Maybe streaking the scenery sideways while leaving the craft in focus like you already have would have given the feeling of a speedy landing. Don't know if thats what you were going for but it would have helped. Nice try though.
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Re: not sure? Gallery try

Postby McLovin » Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:36 pm

how do I make the lights all sparkly
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Re: not sure? Gallery try

Postby Airshow_lover » Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:46 pm

i think it would have been better if you ahd made the plane more distinct. Maybe not blur the landing gear?

nice first try though. :)
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Re: not sure? Gallery try

Postby born_2_fly » Wed Aug 23, 2006 6:39 am

Really great shot, only thing I would suggest is to 'stay-in-the-lines-more' as some of the blur has made its way onto the fuselage. But other than that, nice shot.  8)

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Postby flyboy 28 » Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:55 am

Too much heat blur. Turboprops really don't even have any visible unless it's the right lighting.
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Re: not sure? Gallery try

Postby Harold » Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:58 am

how do I make the lights all sparkly

You should get Nick's LightFix 2... very cool effects and courtesy of our very own Nick Needham!

About the shot: I think this has a very nice 'painting' feel over it ... but I think it doesn't belong in the Gallery.
Remember: only the very best shots should go in the Gallery and I know you can do better ;)
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