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1st try for the Gallery

Postby McLovin » Mon Aug 21, 2006 12:07 am

just a quick pic I took here she goes!
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Re: 1st try for the Gallery

Postby Clipper » Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:36 am

Nice coloring Tex, but could use a little more drama or visual impact. Great to see you give it a shot!
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Re: 1st try for the Gallery

Postby Harold » Mon Aug 21, 2006 2:45 pm

I like it (and Lancasters ;D) ... so YES! I like to see this one in the gallery.
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Re: 1st try for the Gallery

Postby Overspeed » Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:26 pm

Nice coloring Tex, but could use a little more drama or visual impact. Great to see you give it a shot!


yeah, like clipper said, i would have also liked some scenery, or other visual thing in the pic, but the sky does look awesome :o
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Re: 1st try for the Gallery

Postby MOUSY » Mon Aug 21, 2006 6:13 pm

Sorry to be so depressing dude, but there is absoltely nothing happening in this shot.
My suggestions:
- Better cloud formations that will reflect varying pretty colours.
- A different angle on the craft to light it up better.
-And if it still lacks, possibly a touch of scenery or subtly colured water.

Nice try. :)
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Re: 1st try for the Gallery

Postby Harold » Tue Aug 22, 2006 2:08 am

This shot is backlit so therefore I think it is supposed to have little detail ...

Althought the skies could have been a little more interesting, I think this shot is really nice; it has that 'wide open' feel too it.

But beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I just happen to like Lannies ;)
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