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Postby cspyro21 » Wed Aug 09, 2006 10:55 am

Well, seems everyone's having a pic or two rated, so I thought i might join the bandwagon and ask you to rate one of mine:

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I was thinking to improve it by adding a bit more feeling to the pic with some better clouds (as you can see they're all gappy and don't form one single cloudlayer), plus considering this pic contains some form of "action", perhaps I could increase the feeling of this by getting an AI aircraft taking off for instance. Also, playing with the lighting would probably help too.

Thanks for rating! :)
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Re: Rate This Pic ....

Postby Hai Perso Coyone? » Wed Aug 09, 2006 11:20 am

7/10

Maybe more scenery in the distance...like you said, an AI plane would've made this fantastic...some rain too...and please get rid of those nasty blobs that POSKY calls
"NAV LIGHTS"....They look horrible as they are modelled on instead of using .fx files for them... >:( ;D
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Re: Rate This Pic ....

Postby Clipper » Wed Aug 09, 2006 3:20 pm

8 for this one Charlie. I honestly love the perspective. Low, dirty runway feel to the pic. Great dust/exhaust effect. Aircraft is a little stretched, maybe could use a bit more contrast in the clouds to define them more. Apart from that a well conceived effort.
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Re: Rate This Pic ....

Postby krigl » Thu Aug 10, 2006 4:16 am

6.5 - nice effects and colours, stretching not such a good element here though, and not enough going on to warrant such a quiet sky.
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Re: Rate This Pic ....

Postby Harold » Thu Aug 10, 2006 6:09 am

7. I really like it but you might want to consider a little more interesting sky. Other wise it's a great shot!

Someone needs to sweep that runway though ;D
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Re: Rate This Pic ....

Postby Ecko » Thu Aug 10, 2006 9:40 am

7 - Nice and very realistic, but lacks something.
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