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Re: Rate this + For the gallery

Postby Ecko » Sun Aug 13, 2006 8:08 am

To be honest Jake, from your answer, I get the feeling you don't want any critisism?
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Re: Rate this + For the gallery

Postby Jakemaster » Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:21 am

To be honest Jake, from your answer, I get the feeling you don't want any critisism?


No, I do, I was just answering your criticisms with the reasons for everything being that way
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Re: Rate this + For the gallery

Postby Jakemaster » Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:24 am

I follow ecko's post lol, the angle isn't that pleasing. Also, the contrails don't appear in that type of weather conditions, need to be cool humid weather. And I can't read the airline name or know what liverly then it's not complete.

My final score 6.5/10 lol!! ;D


What do you mean 'its not complete'.  The livery is a PrivatAir livery, the airline name is there just as it is on the real livery, right next to the door with light blue saying "operated by KLM Royal Dutch Airlines" right under it.  And why cant a sunny day be cool and humid?
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Re: Rate this + For the gallery

Postby Souichiro » Sun Aug 13, 2006 2:10 pm

Actually I think the shot has quite some depth! Mainly due to the way you can see the runway go into the distance and also the taxi-way.. Those are two elements I reallly like!

Though the clouds and sky aren't contrasting much doesn't mean it isn't good! I like the soothing atmosphere in the shot.

The last thing that I really like in the shot is the transition of the clouds from quite sharp in the front to a  bit of fuzziness in the back.

Definitely not a bad shot Jake!
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Re: Rate this + For the gallery

Postby maulepilot117 » Sun Aug 13, 2006 10:15 pm

like it jake...the livery and scenary looks real good!  The only thing that could have made this better is a little more AI and a sunrise or sunset in the background, but I know those arent in your control.

overall, i like it a lot...8/10 ;D
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