by beaky » Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:47 am
Hm. want a number? How about a 7?
This is a great idea! Very nice atmosphere.
It could be zoomed in just a hair... and although I really like the way the plane is "part of the scenery", I think it would have been fine to offset the plane a little, say, to the left, so it's more in composition with the peak in the middle foreground.
Aside from basic Photgraphy 101 composition, I find with inflight shots, putting the plane off-center helps suggest its movement, without using rain or contrails.
Not crazy about that angle on the plane, either.... not its "best side".
Also, if it were mine, I'd crop the hell out of the top of it. "Negative space" is all fine and good, but that's way too much featureless sky, unless you were showing the plane even farther in the distance.
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beaky on Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:50 am, edited 1 time in total.