try this one...

[JLangholzJ]

I figgured out my jaggies problem, I can amp up my anti aliasing in the card, but b/c its a laptop, it lacks performance, so I'm left with this:





hows the composition and soforth??

thanks guys, appreciate all the help

[spitfire boy]

good composition but needs more supporting elements - cloud for example...

[mhoffman50]

I like the composition as well.  I don't mind the lack of clouds because sometimes we fly on cloudless days.  However, by adding those elements it can contribute to feeling of distance or the size/feel of the environment.