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Postby JLangholzJ » Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:47 pm

hey guys, I've been busy for a while, but here's one of the latest. Just recently I found out that many fs9 planes work in fs2k2!
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Re: critiques

Postby spitfire boy » Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:50 pm

Good perspective but too far zoomed out.
Potentially nice vista but spoilt by blurry undetailed scenery
Not enough to look at in the top 2/3rds of the pic.

You have all the basics of screenshooting about right.... now you need to work on the unbelievably small but oh-so-crucial details... ;)
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Re: critiques

Postby Clipper » Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:59 pm

Couldn't agree more. Your overall composition attitude has great potential. The cloud positioning is fine, they lack a bit of density though(weather settings). Interesting slice of moon, excellent aircraft angle....zoom in a touch to show aircraft details as Spit mentioned. The blurries? maybe flying too fast for a full texture load, maybe card is a bit slow..Overall shows fine potential...mean that.. :)
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Re: critiques

Postby JLangholzJ » Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:40 pm

I've got anti-alias on, but what else are some of you guys doing to help out taking the jaggies off?
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Re: critiques

Postby Clipper » Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:21 pm

Try to up your resolution in the hardware settings in FS9. Maybe adjust your video card settingg to a higher AA value. Brightnes in the shot forces jaggies as well, maybe work with lower screenshot lighting situations (closer to the beginning and end of the day) if my first two suggestions fail.
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Re: critiques

Postby JLangholzJ » Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:21 pm

actually I'm running FS8, and thanks
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