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Postby Tom... » Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:50 pm

Hey Everyone, recently i have started to use some of the more powerfull features of PS and i have come up with this

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Please tell me what you think and what i should change (or not)

and here is the original

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PS i have a high res version if anyone wants it

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Re: Critique

Postby lilley » Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:57 pm

quite simple really... wow!

I dont quite have the capabilities, or time to learn, in photoshop that brings those results out!

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Postby a1 » Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:02 pm

Very nice. I see nothing bad to say about it. ;)
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Re: Critique

Postby stuart1044 » Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:06 pm

Looks spot on, you have nailed the lighting!!

Just wish i had time to create something this great ;)
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Re: Critique

Postby J. » Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:06 pm

aircraft and ground looks good :)

however the clouds look weird.
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Re: Critique

Postby spitfire boy » Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:29 pm

agree with kermit about the clouds, and I also feel the raindrops are a bit too prominent.

However all of this is more than made up for by that jaw-dropping lighting! :o
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Re: Critique

Postby Tom... » Sun Jan 13, 2008 2:53 pm

Had a bit of a tinker with the levels to try and fix the clouds

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Re: Critique

Postby cpthammond » Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:23 pm

Cool apart from the underside of the aircraft is a little over saturated with those white lights.
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Re: Critique

Postby spitfire boy » Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:48 pm

Looks good Tom - I personally think the lighting on the plane being saturated adds a wonderful drama... :D
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Re: Critique

Postby Clipper » Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:53 pm

I prefer the pre adjusted version. The rainbow coloring in the clouds is impressive and seems to get lost in the updated version.. Now if you can add a touch more scenery you're really kicking butt..really dramatic work Tom.
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