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Postby Clipper » Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:42 am

This was a possible entry to Wars, but I eventually decided to go with another shot. So what do you think? Interesting perspective? Boring? Too something, not enough something else? Let's have it....both barrels.. ;) What would you have done differently? Once you're done with the screenshot, take a rip at my sig. See any defects in the construction? Colors complimentary or clashy? What would you change to make it nicer?...

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Re: Rip This!

Postby fighter25 » Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:24 am

This is a very nice shot Clipper. The only thing I don't like is the ramp in front of the Cessna. I do like that shot though. The golden shine looks great, and it looks to be an interesting angle. Is it taken from the back of another plane?
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Re: Rip This!

Postby Clipper » Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:29 am

Fighter, I got this perspective by zooming out in spot view using F1View.  :)
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Re: Rip This!

Postby thebrelon » Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:09 am

too grey, and the ramp... otherwise beautiful lighting as usual, and interresting compo. it would have been better with a different sky, less clouds, touches of blue or other colours, like you usually do, or like your entry for the war.

regarding your sig, the shots are blurred, it would have been really better if they were sharper, otherwise nice sig!!!!

(note to myself: don't criticise others sig, and go and get a new one....)
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Re: Rip This!

Postby a1 » Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:24 am

Very interesting perspective but the stairs kinda ruin it. If you have moved the stairs a bit to the left the shot would be great. ;)
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Re: Rip This!

Postby stuart1044 » Sun Nov 11, 2007 2:41 pm

For me its the obvious..... the stairs take away all the attention from any of the aircraft.
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