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Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby ThomasKaira » Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:21 pm

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby a1 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:08 am

Pretty good. ;) Too zoomed in for a night shot IMO. I kinda like it.

TIP: If you want to do a close up at night you should remember that it should have adequate lighting. Try to put the plane somewhere where there is airport lights or something to light up the plane.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby Harold » Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:01 am

All the above plus switch on the aircraft's lights ... if you would have some lights in the flight deck that would be really nice.

Plus, I think your shot is too compressed; you're only using 30 of the 100kb that are allowed here.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby born_2_fly » Mon Aug 13, 2007 7:17 am

What model is that? 8-)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby Double_Farvel » Mon Aug 13, 2007 2:34 pm

Nice shot, but perhaps a bit more interesting secenery in the backround and a little bit more light. I also just can't stand airbuses.  >:(
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Airbus by night

Postby born_2_fly » Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:16 pm

Nice shot, but perhaps a bit more interesting secenery in the backround and a little bit more light. I also just can't stand airbuses.  >:(


Hmmm.....  ::)

I hate Boeings...

Not.

Good lord people they are aircraft manufacturers. Grow up!
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