The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly / Analyze This

A workshop designed to help everyone improve their screenshot skills, featuring Simworld, the Screenart Gallery, tutorials, contests and much more!

The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly / Analyze This

Postby Clipper » Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:23 pm

Here's a couple of AH payware Corsair pics. Both have been edited with a slight increase to the contrast and some sharpening using Irfanview. What do you feel are
Last edited by Clipper on Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
User avatar
Clipper
Global Moderator
Global Moderator
 
Posts: 8420
Joined: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:40 am

Re: The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly / Analyze This

Postby Souichiro » Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:15 am

Second one isn't reallly good at all. The plane is cut off to much to show any of it's interesting features properly.. there is to little of the airport lighting nor is there anything interesting to see in the background. The only thing slightly interesting are the cockpit lights.

To end with positivism..

The first one is almost brilliant! I only think you chose the wrong time of day... Since I think these type of shots work better in daytime. Also your perspective is just slightly to high. It just cut of a bit of your lefthand corner tire.. ( right hand if you're in the plane.) Somehow I think it disturbs the pic a bit.
Last edited by Clipper on Tue Nov 14, 2006 5:49 am, edited 1 time in total.
Image
User avatar
Souichiro
Ground hog
Ground hog
 
Posts: 0
Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:34 am

Re: The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly / Analyze This

Postby Mr.Mugel » Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:34 am

Ok, Cirrus clouds are too dense, try putting em far higher, 20.000 to 30.000 feet is usually a good point for me.

The first one is quite nice, but:

- Aircraft could be a tad darker
- Scenery far too modern, that
Mr.Mugel
 

Re: The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly / Analyze This

Postby thebrelon » Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:16 pm

nothing much to say about the first one...
I mean nothing more

for the second one, I would have change the camera position a little bit closer to the fuselage, and pan out to have the cockpit on the left of the pic and the runway lighting on the right/background.
and yes you produced better sky in other shots. you can surely work on that point.

;)

vince
Last edited by thebrelon on Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Image
laptop: kenitec D900TV
Pentium 4 3.4gHz HT
4Gb corsair DDR II 533MHZ
2x 60Gb Hard drive
Nvidia geforce 6800  DDR3 256 Mb
User avatar
thebrelon
Captain
Captain
 
Posts: 838
Joined: Tue Sep 20, 2005 2:50 pm
Location: france


Return to Studio V Screenshot Workshop

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 262 guests