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Micah's First Attempt

Postby flyboy_14 » Thu Aug 31, 2006 5:49 pm

First try.

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Re: Micah's First Attempt

Postby Immelman » Thu Aug 31, 2006 6:22 pm

Sorry, no., I would add some clouds to make the background more interesting and the bottom of the plane lacks some detail, i dont know if you could use a different model or get more light on it(although that would completely change the shot.  Its a cool angle though and i like the sun.
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Re: Micah's First Attempt

Postby Clipper » Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:13 pm

Definately has character and style, your avitar almost swayed me as well, not a yes from me either but keep trying! Try to get more detail or depth to the images. It's hard to do with a bright sun, but you're on the right track for sure!  :)
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Re: Micah's First Attempt

Postby Alonso » Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:34 pm

It looks too: "I made it on MS Paint", sorry but a no
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Re: Micah's First Attempt

Postby Harold » Fri Sep 01, 2006 2:59 am

I think the overall image is very nice! I really like the contours on the plane combined with the white border :D And that sun is really cool too!

But as far as voting for the Gallery goes I say 'no' ... I know you did this on purpose but there's too little to look at in the shot. And please do not use taglines in your next efforts ...

I do like our way of thinking and like to see more coming from you. Good luck!
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