Improve?

[Bpilot0]

how can i improve on this and can i have any comments as well please

the plane has just taken off from seattle international

[Clipper]

Bpilot, I think your choice of aircraft is great...hey, it's a Bus after all. There's quite a bit we can discuss on improving your shot. I think the first area we should approach is trying to eliminate or reduce the jagged edges you see along the body of the aircraft. I think we should proceed here slowly, one step at a time, and hopefully before long you'll be a screenartist master. Now, on to jagged edges. The issue is called aliasing and there's one or two things we should look at in trying to reduce this problem. First have a look (read) this aliasing tutorial by LVA157 http://www.simviation.com/cgi-bin/yabb/YaBB.cgi?board=studiov;action=display;num=1153691224

Next up, it's important to know if you have a video card installed in your computer or integrated graphics.