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Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:26 pm
by lunitic_8
last shots of the year from me, from th mission 'Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation', so i hope you like :P
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Enjoy, Feel free to tell me what you think ;)

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 12:38 am
by lunitic_8
whoops, just noticed in 1 &2 i used the exact same angles :-[

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:10 am
by Boikat
whoops, just noticed in 1 &2 i used the exact same angles :-[



That's okay.

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:31 pm
by Brando14100
The first two are nice. The last one is a different story. Too much ground with nothing on it in front of the chopper. The nose of the chopper is also missing. That's a problem. In a shot like that you either want to have the aircraft be the center, or have something interesting like weather or scenery be the center. You're somewhere in the middle with this one.

8-)

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:27 pm
by lunitic_8
The first two are nice. The last one is a different story. Too much ground with nothing on it in front of the chopper. The nose of the chopper is also missing. That's a problem. In a shot like that you either want to have the aircraft be the center, or have something interesting like weather or scenery be the center. You're somewhere in the middle with this one.

8-)

well there was the 'scientist' i had to 'rescue' but right when i pressed "V" the vanished :D

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:33 pm
by Boikat
The first two are nice. The last one is a different story. Too much ground with nothing on it in front of the chopper. The nose of the chopper is also missing. That's a problem. In a shot like that you either want to have the aircraft be the center, or have something interesting like weather or scenery be the center. You're somewhere in the middle with this one.

8-)

well there was the 'scientist' i had to 'rescue' but right when i pressed "V" the vanished :D


Geologists are notoriously camera shy.

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:34 pm
by lunitic_8
The first two are nice. The last one is a different story. Too much ground with nothing on it in front of the chopper. The nose of the chopper is also missing. That's a problem. In a shot like that you either want to have the aircraft be the center, or have something interesting like weather or scenery be the center. You're somewhere in the middle with this one.

8-)

well there was the 'scientist' i had to 'rescue' but right when i pressed "V" the vanished :D


Geologists are notoriously camera shy.

;D ;D

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:15 pm
by Brando14100
The first two are nice. The last one is a different story. Too much ground with nothing on it in front of the chopper. The nose of the chopper is also missing. That's a problem. In a shot like that you either want to have the aircraft be the center, or have something interesting like weather or scenery be the center. You're somewhere in the middle with this one.

8-)

well there was the 'scientist' i had to 'rescue' but right when i pressed "V" the vanished :D


Usually you still want to have all or none of the aircraft in it. In my opinion, 1 person wouldn't have changed this shot. By the way, I'm just trying to give you advice to help you get better. Not trying to be mean or anything. I've heard this same stuff from Harold.

8-)

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:16 pm
by lunitic_8
thank you everyone for the advice, i love it ;)

Re: Mt. Saint Helens Evacuation

PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:44 am
by haroldkip
I've heard this same stuff from Harold

Though, hopefully my intonation is slightly different ::)