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some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 6:21 pm
by firemonte007
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c&c welcome
thanks for looking
Jason

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 6:27 pm
by PD87
YOU, have come a Very LONG way in a really short time. Makes me proud ;D ;) EXCELLENT work bro, keep it up! 8-)

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:10 pm
by JSpahn
The last one is really well composed!

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:48 pm
by ThomasKaira
If only the Connie Studio V contest was still open, that third one would have my recommendation. ;)

This man here can walk the walk. 8-)

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:22 pm
by an-225
These shots are OK, but they have alot more potential. The first is lovely, nice colours, setting, scenery and plane. However, the angle is a bit boring, I suggest placing the camera next to the nose, or prop. The second, has some nice foreground scenery, but the shot overall feels lacking. I suggest some cloud cover, and an angle similar to the one I recommended for shot one. Three is quite nice, I suggest you add some cloud cover again, and find a new, innovative angle. Shot four, is quite nice. Only thing that needs fixing here, is the angle. I recommend you move the camera closer to the fence, and just above it, to show half the fence, and half the (unobstructed) view of the airport.

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:56 pm
by SubZer0
awesome last shot with the concorde. well taken.

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 1:13 am
by Layne.
Actually it's a TU-144 (145?) Concordski! The russian i say "copy" because they stole the prototype plans which ended up in a well not so good way :) But uh its in qantas paint but its russian

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:16 am
by firemonte007
Actually it's a TU-144 (145?) Concordski! The russian i say "copy" because they stole the prototype plans which ended up in a well not so good way :) But uh its in qantas paint but its russian


thank you for the compliments
your right it is a TU-144

jason

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:55 am
by haroldkip
Good work Jason. I really like the silhouette of the trees against that orange sky. Very clever.
Number #2 and #3 are a bit boring IMO. I think the angle is too flat and the scenery could be more interesting. Also fall makes me sad ;D
The last one is very nice. I like the fence but feel it should better not be there as there are things going on behind it that we can hardly see ...

I also would've cut of some of those big chunks of grass in the bottom of the shots. I don't mind cropping but some people only like to see the entire shot :-/

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 8:08 am
by krigl
Nice ones, the first one looks great with the sky and the livery very similar and the trees sillhouetted.... :)

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 10:06 am
by Sovien
That connie looks like a really nice model. Which one is it?

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:46 pm
by firemonte007
That connie looks like a really nice model. Which one is it?


the connie can be located here....http://www.simviation.com/members/fsxvintage8.htm

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:44 pm
by Sovien
Sweet. Appreciate the link ;)

Re: some randoms..curious what ya think

PostPosted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:23 am
by firemonte007
Sweet. Appreciate the link ;)


no problem 8-)