Better, better by a longshot, but there are still some rather noticable jaggies. (FS9 default anti-aliasing isn't very good, so try tweaking the anti-aliasing in your vid-card. By the way, what kind of video card do you have?)
Try tweaking the quality sliders in Irfanview to get the best quality, as well. My suggestions were only what I do, but they needn't be yours. Find your own nitche.
But do NOT, by any means, give up. I promise you, you WILL get better.
I'll upload a few of mine soon, and I'd also suggest you get this recorder module to get some very nice views.
http://www.fs-recorder.net/