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The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Escort

PostPosted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 3:43 pm
by cspyro21
Part 6A here

The 109 was going headlong at him, and he was doing the same to the 109. I watched in amazement to see who would be the victor, but soon pulled away as I felt some rounds being fired at my tail. I kept my eyes glued on the battle between Rory and the 109. It opened fire, and Rory followed suit.
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Rory pulled up slightly, as the moon shone on this fierce charge between the two aircraft.
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Tracers spewed everywhere, illuminating the sky. I felt emotionless as I watched the battle, waiting for one to pull away. Then I realised that I was fearing for Rory's life, and beared down upon the 109  to intervene.
But what I saw was horrific. A trail of flames erupted from Rory's fuselage, and he rolled over. He was going to die, I thought, as my throat ran dry. Rory's going to die.
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"Christ!" I heard over the radio. "What happened?"
"RORY! BAIL!" I shouted. "BAIL OUT!!"
"The...the cockpit hatch! It's stuck!!"
"Keep trying Rory, hurry before your wings catch fire!"
"I'm trying!!" He told me, as I watched the terror unfold.
He can't die, I thought, he's barely older than I am!
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"Thank God!" I heard Rory cry in relief. His cockpit hatch was open, and I saw him fly out of his Spitfire. I breathed a sigh of relief for him, at least he was alive. but now, there were fewer Allied fighters escorting the Lancasters, and more and more Messerschmitt's were coming every minute.
I tracked one 109 as it headed towards the Lancaster formation. I felt my blood boil. I'm not risking ANY more men's lives! I thought aloud. I swung my Spit to his 5 o' clock, as he opened fire on the formation.
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His rounds tore through the Lancasters airframe. "This is Two, taking heavy fire!" I heard over the radio.

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"Roger that, Two, coming in now," I told Two, almost snarling as I said it. Remembering the short fire time of the Spitfire, I fired bursts at the 109.
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Fortunately, he broke off of attacking the Lancaster, and this was my chance. following him, I readied myself to take revenge of the risk to Rory's life.
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"It appeared that Fritz had done more damage than I thought," Two said over the radio as his Lanc dipped down low. #1 engine had ceased to work, and his wings were badly damaged. "Come on, old gal," I heard Two utter to himself as he tried to regain height.
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"Damnit, come on!" Two cursed at the Lancaster.
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I watched as it's port wing swung down low, caught the ground - and that was the end of that. A cataclysmic explosion ripped down the aircraft's fuselage, as the wings fuelled the explosion.
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A living hell......A living hell... I thought to myself. A living hell, watching my friends fall so quickly alongside me......

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 3:56 pm
by The_Joker_Flyer
The writing is amazazing.. the story is brilliant.. and te shots are spectacular as usual!!!!!!!  ;D ;D ;D

Very excited for the next part   ;)

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 2:34 am
by cspyro21
The writing is amazazing.. the story is brilliant.. and te shots are spectacular as usual!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D

Very excited for the next part ;)


Thanks for the comment Joker!
(Text also edited by the way - typo's ::))

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 4:25 am
by Hai Perso Coyone?
Speechless................... :o :o

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 7:57 am
by F-16Viper
Speechless................... :o :o



same  :ohere

(you relize we both just said somthing though ;D ::))

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:15 am
by cspyro21
Speechless................... :o :o


same  :ohere

(you relize we both just said somthing though ;D ::))


Thanks guys!
the next (7th) and final chapter looks to be set to a heartstopper.....Hopefully there won't be too many shots (18-20 in all for chapter 6, so far I've used about 15! :o)

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:25 am
by cheesegrater
and te shots are spectacular as usual!!!!!!!


I can't see anything.

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 1:44 pm
by Clipper

I can't see anything.


Turn up your brightness, or take off your shades..!!

Cspyro, real nailbiting, edge of your seat story. Great entertainment!  :)

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (6B): Bomber Esco

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:46 am
by krigl
Great stuff Spyro, very dramatic and nice shots... enjoyable and exciting stuff!!!