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The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:56 pm
by cspyro21
Hi all,
Here is a little story I am putting together (some of you may have read the "prologue" entitled 'The Return....' which can be found a few pages back in the freeware screenshot forum.) I don't know whether you will like this story, and, it's not meant to be completely historically accurate, so here goes.

RAF CRANWELL
1000 HOURS
14TH NOVEMBER 1942

I stepped out of the car. The wind and rain instantly set upon me like a ravaging swarm of locusts. But then I saw it. The main builidng at Cranwell College. It was tremendous, with it's wonderful architechture and things. I was astounded.
"Well, this is goodbye," my father said, as he approched me and stood next to me. This, son, will be your home for the next 2 months. Good luck with your training, and," he said with a tearful eye, "please write back home to tell us how you are doing."
"Dad," I replied, hugging him, 2I will live through this war. Besides, I'm not even a true RAF pilot yet, this will be my training. Still, goodbye, I'll write to you soon," with a final hug, as I turned towards the building that stood in front of me. My RAF career was about to begin.

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Part 1B here

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:03 pm
by The_Joker_Flyer
I expected something longer....  ::)

Though its a great beginning nonetheless... even after these few lines i already cant wait what will happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D

Its great ;)

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:07 pm
by RollerBall
I LOVE it you cheeky devil. A screen shot without a hint of an aircraft or much else in it at all.

What next..... :o

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:03 pm
by simonmd
One paragraph? Cruel!

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:23 pm
by killerbunny
One paragraph? Cruel!


Yeah!

I want more!

Re: The Story of Charlie Dowzell (1): Training

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 7:53 am
by Hai Perso Coyone?
I am left speechless....and this is just the beginning :o :o :o