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Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:45 am
by born_2_fly
Afternoon all  ;)

I don't usually do all to much regarding photography, but heres a picture I took (and edited, so not sure where to put it?  :-?)

Tell me if you like it, constructive criticism please!

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Can't spell  ;D

Re: Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 1:39 pm
by Omag 2.0
Nice sense of autums...  :)

Re: Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 3:03 pm
by born_2_fly
Nice sense of autums...  :)

Thanks Omag  :)

BTW heres the original  :)

Cheers,
Alex

Re: Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 9:10 am
by Rifleman
Constructively only...........looks like you killed all the shadow detail with too much contrast...........be more selective when you make manips so that you don't bring down the overall information level from the original.........

I would have reworked the image a bit lighter in the dark areas, like this..........

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Re: Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 8:33 am
by Jared
very unique view :) I like it

Re: Autumns (Nearly) here

PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 10:56 am
by Omag 2.0
Constructively only...........looks like you killed all the shadow detail with too much contrast...........be more selective when you make manips so that you don't bring down the overall information level from the original.........

I would have reworked the image a bit lighter in the dark areas, like this..........

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Hmm... personally I think that the original version was better, as the dark area's don't draw the attention away from the main feel of the shot. It intensifies the shot. The grassleaves showing give it a more mundane atmosphere... The first one is more artistic.

But in the end, it all boils down to personal taste I guess...