Hi Anxyous, welcome to the V! Good to see you're posting a shot here.
That is a very nice screenshot for your first time. I like it a lot. Very photogenetic aircraft (though I don't particulary like Sabres) and some great dynamics! I like it!
I won't go into details but I do like to tell you have you can have shots that 'weigh' 150kb. Yours is about a third of that and it shows; it is too compressed.
Try reading
this and see if you can cook soup of it ... if not give me a call; I'm happy to point you in the right direction
BTW: It is not that 'we techfreaks' think that our shots are better than anyone else. There are definitely differences in your shots and the ones that some of our more senior members produce. But that is only because they've learned how to improve, which is one of the reasons why I joined SimV ...
We are (or at least I am) here to help by giving feedback on other peoples shots. I make an effort to comment on
every thread in the screenshot section, pointing out things that I see, so that the artist can learn something from it. I don't do it because I need to prove that 'mine is bigger than yours'.
