Plane Race, my first edit ever.

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Plane Race, my first edit ever.

Postby The3lf » Mon Sep 08, 2008 10:04 am

So im kinda a newb at edits. please coment. how can i improve?

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Re: Plane Race, my first edit ever.

Postby ShaneG_old » Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:29 pm

I like this pic and the idea! my two loves combined in one shot! The only thing that looks odd to me is I think the plane should not be as sharply focused, or the car, depends on which is the primary target here! ;)
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Re: Plane Race, my first edit ever.

Postby The3lf » Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:09 pm

ok thanks for the idea, ill look into it for the next shot.
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Re: Plane Race, my first edit ever.

Postby krigl » Mon Sep 08, 2008 3:27 pm

I don't know how you can improve it, but I love it! Nominating it!!
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Re: Plane Race, my first edit ever.

Postby machineman9 » Mon Sep 08, 2008 4:07 pm

I think the only thing that could be improving, is the colouring on the aircraft.

It looks fairly matt, and without as much shading or highlights as the rest of the image. Maybe adjust the tones or add some lighting.

But I think Krigl made a very good choice by nominating it. It is a great first edit.
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