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i have already posted this as my second entry in the studio V edit this comp

THE ORIGINAL



THE EDITED


and i would like some feedback please



P.S this is my SECOND ever edit (the first edit was my first entry)

trippie.  exeactly how much acid have you had today?

not enough lol

Its a good shot, the only thing i would say is that way that the nose and tail are in the 'soft focus' part of the screen. Other than that, I like.

Alex

And exactly why are we doing a poll?  Let me let you in on a Little secret, most Sim-V members don't like the poll unless we are voting on what screenshot is best in the competition or the occasional "do I need my injection today?" type poll  ;) I happen to know this because i am one of those people  ;D If you want to know how you did on your edit, simply just ask for it you don't need a poll to do so  ;D

Anyway good edit, i don't remember my second edit but I'm pretty sure it was worse than that  ;D

hehe thanks, i only put on the poll so that you lovely people dont have to go to the trouble of writing messages (well, unless you want to)

I'm just gona come out and say it, the original is better than the edit in this case. I've learned that blunt seems to be better than not, sorry.

Pretty good for a second edit!

thanks, im currently waiting for the next 'edit this' contest

Couldn't find your first, but these are nice shots! 8-)

Couldn't find your first, but these are nice shots! 8-)

From over 2 years ago  ;)