Nice composition in this. It's usually best to motion blur either the background or the object of interest but not both. You could move the 2nd Hurri more to the right to fill that gap on the right hand side but personally I would just crop a little off that side.
I can see a good shot in this if you persevere..
Re: Simple Edit - 1st upload
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:00 pm
by doomfreak777
oooh ok, ill try blurring different bits later tonight. I did try just blurring different parts of the plane but it doesnt look good when part of the plane is blurred and the rest is not. If i come up with somethnig better ill upload it later for viewing Thanks very much doomfreak777
Re: Simple Edit - 1st upload
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:17 pm
by doomfreak777
Here is the image when i blur the background only.
Here is the image when just the aircraft are blurred, its a bit taccy, i still need to get more experience in editing but in my opinion i actually prefer the above one. :)
Doomfreak777
Re: Simple Edit - 1st upload
Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:32 pm
by machineman9
The one with the background blurred looks much nicer I think.
The aircraft closest to the screen is the more focused on part of the shot, so that shouldnt really be blurred out I dont think. Focal blur on the background is good, and you could try adding motion blur to the further back, higher aircraft.
Hmm, I really cant tell the difference between the hurricane and the spitfire. Ohwell, whatever it is, it looks nice!
Re: Simple Edit - 1st upload
Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2008 12:52 pm
by doomfreak777
Ok this is with the hurricane in the background motion blurred. I think it looks quite good. Ive also found out that one of the effects on Photofiltre is a fog affect (black or white) and it actually looks really good, more like cloud then fog though, so i might use that sometime, anyway what do ya think?