Eagle on the Rise

Posted:
Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:32 pm
by chrism7262
hey all. its been a while since i've done a composite, or any edit for that matter. this one still needs a good deal of work. let me know what you think or what i can do. i still have to fix the lighting i think...
any suggestions are appreciated!!

Re: Eagle on the Rise

Posted:
Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:49 am
by Layne.
I know that you blurred the nose purposely but it gives it an odd feeling... maybe if you make it smaller and less intense it will be better... The backdrop is great and so are those lovely Vapor Trails. Although i don't know why they are black at the ends :-/
Nice Edit!
Re: Eagle on the Rise

Posted:
Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:33 am
by jnc1
I like the angle and composition, it's very dynamic giving a good sense of movement.
The effects you have added need a little work as they look very harsh and ice looking. I also think the lighting is a little off. The sun is setting in the background so I think the top of the aircraft will be deeply shaded, as you mentioned, you are aware of this.
Keep working on it. It sould turn out really well
Re: Eagle on the Rise

Posted:
Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:32 pm
by chrism7262
thanks. yea i was never very good with the lighting. and i'll definately try that thanks to both of you. :D