"Seeking you out"

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"Seeking you out"

Postby firemonte007 » Tue Oct 16, 2007 5:31 pm

A trio of F4F Wildcats seeking out the "Rising Sun"
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I would like to thank my loving wife with helping me edit this shot( it was not taken with a recorder...the original shot had only 1 F4F)

C&C is always welcome
Thanks for looking
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Re: "Seeking you out"

Postby Vuikag » Tue Oct 16, 2007 8:39 pm

"This is yellow 1 to yellow 1! Break right! Tojo's on yer' tail!!!"
"Who me?"
"No! yellow 1!!!"
That formation is pretty tight! don't see anything wrong with the picture though.
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Re: "Seeking you out"

Postby spitfire boy » Wed Oct 17, 2007 1:39 am

It's rather obvious that the planes are the same cut-out re-pasted 3 times onto the shot. Maybe you should've tried taking three pics of ech plane you needed, at a subtly different angle.

Plus, why use an FS background in a composite? Use a nice, photo background!! ;)

The idea is nice... but it could be even better... ;)
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Re: "Seeking you out"

Postby john_uk » Wed Oct 17, 2007 5:07 am

nice idea mate, next time try and use differant liveries of the aircraft. takes out the repetition.

It's rather obvious that the planes are the same cut-out re-pasted 3 times onto the shot. Maybe you should've tried taking three pics of ech plane you needed, at a subtly different angle.

Plus, why use an FS background in a composite? Use a nice, photo background!! ;)

The idea is nice... but it could be even better... ;)


do you edit SB, i dont think ive ever seen an edit from you yet you dish it out to everyone else.
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Re: "Seeking you out"

Postby spitfire boy » Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:43 am

nice idea mate, next time try and use differant liveries of the aircraft. takes out the repetition.

It's rather obvious that the planes are the same cut-out re-pasted 3 times onto the shot. Maybe you should've tried taking three pics of ech plane you needed, at a subtly different angle.

Plus, why use an FS background in a composite? Use a nice, photo background!! ;)

The idea is nice... but it could be even better... ;)


do you edit SB, i dont think ive ever seen an edit from you yet you dish it out to everyone else.


I was just trying to help him improve. Nowhere in there did I state I could do better than he has done.

Isn't that what people post their shots for - some constructive criticism? I wasn't 'dishing it out' - I was attempting to help him. What's so wrong with that? And more to the point, what place is it of yours to comment on that?
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