Bored

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 1:47 pm
by ThatOnePerson
So I whipped this up, my first try at adding heli rotors, what do you guys think?

Re: Bored

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 1:49 pm
by Sytse
Looks pretty good, but I think the rotors could use some more "body". And the chopper could be a bit more in the center of attention.

Re: Bored

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 2:30 pm
by Ben R
Wow..lovely edit, I love the Pavelows!

Re: Bored

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:15 pm
by chrism7262
nice job!! i agree with sytse about the rotors, but this background looks very familiar.

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Re: Bored

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:28 pm
by jnc1
Really like this.
I agree about the rotors - but for me the composition works as it is. it's not easy with such a busy backdrop, but you have used the focus of the water very well.
Not sure - but maybe try adding a gentle highlight to the water (not all, just where the light would catch) - this might draw the eye in to the heli better. imho