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Teamwork

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:18 am
by NDSP
Image


Not sure whats wrong with it, but something doesn't seem right... anyways I did my best to try to resemble a formation


Nick

Re: Teamwork

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:30 am
by mustang666
Nice work Nick :)  it's either the cloud edges or the closeness of the formation given that they're already rolling into the break.  Perhaps another 10ft (relative to the Raptors') apart and it would look like a realistic formation.  Or a tiny heading change on the rolling birds.  That's just my opinion and as it stands it's a good pic. ;) :-X

Re: Teamwork

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:04 pm
by Kleen Harry
Heeeeeey! Nice one, Nick! :)

Mustang6 is really good at formation images. I would definitely follow his advice on the subject!  ;)

Re: Teamwork

PostPosted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 4:59 pm
by chrism7262
nice one1! i agree with mustang turning the two that are breaking a little more toward the outside i think would do it and maybe spreading them out a bit like he said.

great job though!!  ;D