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New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:20 am
by chrism7262
hey all. thought i try simething a little different but i dont know if it turned out alright. let me know!  ;D

any suggestions are appreciated!!

Image

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:24 am
by Layne.
Very good Very good :D Here's a few things to try.

Try adding a heat wave thingy from the back engine for some realism (Edit - JUst found  you have this but make it more noticable)

Maybe a bit of smoke from the engine (Maybe to hard)

And try and make the lighting on the plane a bit darker because the backing looks like it's foggy or rainy.

;D

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:32 am
by Stubbedtoe18
Great plane, love flying the Hawk.  But I don't really think that it blends in with the pic you chose.  But keep going.

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:41 am
by Kleen Harry
Pretty darn good, Chris! You're getting to be pretty good, M8!

Suggestions, by way of trying to be helpful:

1) Put a visible canopy on it.

2) You might try a bit of a top crop and see how that looks to you.

3) Mess around and see if you can get it to blend a little better. There's no formula, you just have to try stuff and see if it seems to make it better or worse. Some things to mess with are saturation, brightness, contrast, hue, color balance. It can be real tricky and sometimes just a real small change is all that is needed. Everyone gets better at that with time.  ;)

Nice to see you posting! Keep up the good work!  :)

Cheers,
Don

P.S. Nice background image!  ;)

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:14 am
by NDSP
Very good Very good :D Here's a few things to try.

Try adding a heat wave thingy from the back engine for some realism (Edit - JUst found  you have this but make it more noticable)

Maybe a bit of smoke from the engine (Maybe to hard)

And try and make the lighting on the plane a bit darker because the backing looks like it's foggy or rainy.

;D



Its always foggy and rainy in the city ;D

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:42 am
by chrism7262
haha no it doesnt now that i look at it, looks like i pasted it right in!!  ;D i'll work on that thanks for the help once again Don!! also to layne i'll work on the exhaust  :D

Re: New York Fly Over

PostPosted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:02 am
by mustang666
Cool job m8  :-X