Big City, little plane

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Big City, little plane

Postby NDSP » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:41 pm

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Probably not as good as the previous... but still a great effort :)


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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby FlyBajan » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:55 pm

I think that is fantastic!! Actually, on my comment on your last edit, I was going to suggest you try a shot from an angle! I noticed that your last couple of shots were flat side on. Very good! :D :D ;)


P.S. Is that guy flying over your house??!!!!
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby NDSP » Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:58 pm

I think that is fantastic!! :D :D ;)


Wow thanks :)
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:08 pm

Pretty good although I don't know if he would get very far without props. I am noticing that in many of your edits, you are missing small details that are subtracting from the realism of the image. Once you pay closer attention to these, your edits will improve more than they already have.  ;)
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby chrism7262 » Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:14 pm

great job!! good match with the brightness. the props are the only thing i can see missing haha. but i know its hard because when you take the screenshot, your in-game scenery is seen through the props and its tough to get rid of the scenery in the game while keeping the props.  ;D

very nice!!
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby a1 » Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:17 pm

once again these types are one of your best. ;)
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby Sytse » Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:21 pm

Another beauty. Very well put together, I even like it better than the previous one. The composition is a lot better than in your other pictures. It would be nice to put some props on her, but I'm not sure if you can do that with the software you use...
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby cpthammond » Fri Aug 03, 2007 3:06 am

Nice!
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby john_uk » Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:56 am

your getting better nick but

1.some props might be needed for fllight
2.the lighting looks weird. its coming from above and left on the plane, but on the photogrpah its from the right.

but your getting better
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby FlyBajan » Fri Aug 03, 2007 6:36 am

2.the lighting looks weird. its coming from above and left on the plane, but on the photogrpah its from the right.  


I disagree. the side of the plane that faces us is not being lit directly, it is in shadow. (see the hard shadow at the base of the main wing cast by the main body) The sun is roughly at the 1:30 position. This is also true for the city. Look at the area at the bottom right of the image. The shadows from the buildings barely make it onto the street! The sun is also in the 1:30 position there as well. In both cases, the light is coming from high and slightly right. It is a pretty good match.
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby Mictheslik » Fri Aug 03, 2007 6:42 am

This is one of your nicest ones yet....apart from the props ;)

There is a slight problem with the angle of the lighting, but it's not too far off so isnt immediately noticeable ;)

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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby Kleen Harry » Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:10 pm

Nick, you've made such a dramatic improvement that the only thing I have to say at this point is, "Keep on keeping on!" I'm just praying that you don't go back to the old way of doing things! Keep going in this direction and you're in fat city!  :)

I also have to say that I really like the process going on here. What I see is members having discussions about making images! That's kewl!  :)

We can respectfully disagree about anything. That's fine. We each have our own point of view. I think, however, that it's very helpful to those making edits, and to those lurking who have not yet taken the leap, to hear different views of the ISSUES surrounding image making! That's a far cry from something like, "Dude, that stinks!"!  ;D ;) :)
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby chrism7262 » Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:39 pm

[quote]Nick, you've made such a dramatic improvement that the only thing I have to say at this point is, "Keep on keeping on!" I'm just praying that you don't go back to the old way of doing things! Keep going in this direction and you're in fat city!
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Re: Big City, little plane

Postby Tjw2 » Fri Aug 03, 2007 7:57 pm

Just awsome  8-)
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