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Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:40 am
by voodoo1
April showers
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Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:49 am
by Sytse
Been bussy eh? Nice capture. :)

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:22 pm
by Kleen Harry
Very nice, Brett! Clean, well-balanced, well-composed, interesting and great use of highlights and shadows!

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:39 pm
by Kleen Harry
P. S. If you did choose to do it, the puddle wouldn't have to be completely contained within the frame. It could extend "forward" out of the frame. That might make a more open feeling and add to the sense of motion and direction.

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 12:40 pm
by eno
This is one of your best ....... however I agree with Harry it would be a masterpiece if the runway had puddles on it.

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 4:55 pm
by voodoo1
Thanks guys it was something I was thinking of doing anyways so I had to try it..  I thought though if there's puddles there has to be spray and lots of moisture so I had to add some.



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Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:00 pm
by john_uk
vodoo do you have a day job?? or do you just edit,

because that is stunning, a true masterpiece!!!!!

is their a high res version say.... 1280 x 1024 the size of my desktop   ::)

john

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:22 pm
by voodoo1
1280x960 mate at SSA..  http://www.screenshotart.com/index.php?showtopic=28450 Many thanks for the kind words.  I wish my day job was editing shots that would suit me down to the ground mate.   These don't take long to do really.

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:46 pm
by Kleen Harry
OMG, Brett! You passed the dreaded "john_uk" test! Good for you, John! Glad you found one that's "right".  ;D ;) :)

It's not at all what I had envisioned Brett BUT it's BETTER than what I had envisioned. Your "mist" idea was the key!  8-)

I downloaded both and viewed them sequentially against a black background. It's amazing the amount of detailed work you did with the mist around the plane.  :o

I'd say you made the "Masterpiece" level with this one, Brett. The re-edit has much more life and "humanity" to it. By comparison, the first one, which is great, appears much more sterile and rigid. The reworked one just flows! Great artistic vision, Brett, and great technique!  :)

For work above and beyond the call of duty you are hereby awarded the presitigious "Fig Leaf Cluster with Fluted Urn and Finial Dangle". Wear it with pride!  ;) :)

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:18 pm
by john_uk
OMG, Brett! You passed the dreaded "john_uk" test! Good for you, John! Glad you found one that's "right".  ;D ;) :)

It's not at all what I had envisioned Brett BUT it's BETTER than what I had envisioned. Your "mist" idea was the key!  8-)

I downloaded both and viewed them sequentially against a black background. It's amazing the amount of detailed work you did with the mist around the plane.  :o

I'd say you made the "Masterpiece" level with this one, Brett. The re-edit has much more life and "humanity" to it. By comparison, the first one, which is great, appears much more sterile and rigid. The reworked one just flows! Great artistic vision, Brett, and great technique!  :)

For work above and beyond the call of duty you are hereby awarded the presitigious "Fig Leaf Cluster with Fluted Urn and Finial Dangle". Wear it with pride!  ;) :)


do a decent edit that doesnt have a fubar'd helo in it harry and i will drool at your edits as well

new background... out with the girlfriend in with a lovely edit... much more attractive :P *john gets slapped*

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 10:13 pm
by USVAF_997
Very Nice!

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:42 am
by Kleen Harry
Hey, John! If your response to an image that you like is to drool over it, I think I'll just continue to make ones that are "FUBAR".  ;D ;D ;) :)

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:12 am
by voodoo1
Lol many thanks guys and thanks too Don I'm glad you noticed the little things..  thanks for the suggestions they really worked!  

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:20 am
by ATI_7500
How about a real challenge, Voodoo and Harry?

Do an edit of LSK MiG-23s. Or LSK MiG-29s.

;)

Re: Luftwaffe 44-04

PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:30 am
by eno
Stunning ......  8-) 8-)